For Reading my group is reading the story called If only.
We changed the way to how we get our work done. So now we get points.
If we get number 1 done and our teacher checks it we get 1 point.
So my group had to get a total of 27.
10pts. How good the story is -
- CHARACTERS - (4) I gave it a 4 because we don’t know much about them. All we know is he lives down the road. The author could have made the characters more interesting by describing them and more detail.
- STORY STRUCTURE - (9) I gave it a 9 because it has really good structure and the ending was satisfying but it didn’t have that much to it.
- LANGUAGES FEATURE - (10) I gave it a 10 because the author did use interesting words like - The obliging giraffe, Huge bull elephant and more.
- THEME - (7 ½) I gave it a 7 ½ because it’s important that you don’t use dangerous things near people
1pts. Character Web -
4pts. If Only Poem
7pts. What if…
1- He screamed off crying with his hand over his eye blood pouring everywhere.
2- He screamed off running down the street with his hands covering his eye when blood is pouring everywhere.
