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Monday, 7 November 2016

Persuasive Writing


My opinion is that schools should allow scooters at morning tea and lunch time because it's a fun and exciting activity to do.

The reason why I think that kids should be allowed because most people will agree to get kids outside. This activity gets kids persisting.

Scootering gets kids moving and gets kids fit. Also it's something different to just the playground.

It persuade others to join and find new friends. They should only make it a certain amount on the court because kids might get hurt. We could also make it that kids can only scooter if they have safety gear.

Kids get a brain break and they can learn a new sport and get to have fun. You can teach them skills that they don't already have.

It's a step for kids to step out of their comfort zone and it makes them to not give up.

All that information is about why I think that kids should be allowed to scooter in school. So that's why I think that they should be allowed.



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