This week in English we have been doing creative writing and learnt different ways of creating a piece of writing, like -
Using a simile, Metaphor, Personification, Assonance, Alliteration, Onomatopoeia,Idiom and Hyperbole. Here a start on my first piece of writing. Its just a start, but I think I did pretty well :D
(As I was laying on my bed I could feel my eyelids closing and the blackness starting to take over and out of nowhere it was pitch black so I Stood up and walked over to turn on my light but couldn't find the switch so I looked for my lamp that was meant to be next to my bed but couldn't’ find that either. Then I tried to feel around to find my bed but I couldn't feel anything, so I tried the dumbest thing ever, I picked a direction and ran as fast as I could. There was nothing at all, so I started freaking out. It was quiet, I was alone and scared, of where I was and who was watching. So I did the thing that everyone would do, I screamed and screamed and screamed but nothing came out, only the sound of my breath.)
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