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Friday, 25 November 2016

My Writing about Chores


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I think that we should do chores around the house.
Because It's NOT fair that parents come home from working 24/7 and come home and clean up all your mess.  

Instead of being bored maybe you could do something about all your chores that need to be done. Maybe when you're bored you could use your initiative and to jobs without been told.

It could teach you a lesson for you not to be lazy for when you're older.
If you start doing chores when you're younger you will be extremely amazing at doing them when you're older.

You could earn treats or money for doing a good amount of jobs.
Maybe to earn more treats you could two jobs at a time, also do jobs without been asked too. Maybe more jobs you do more treats and money you earn.

So that's why I believe that kids should do chores around the house.
Doing chores will teach you a lesson, so kids out there that have chores set for you… DO IT! It will help you when you're older.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Kyra I really like your persuasive writing.I like the way how you told us why we should do chores and that we should do chores now so we are good at them when your are older you could teach me how to do chores.check out my blog http://shsmichaelh.blogspot.co.nz/

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